What could I do? What could I say?

[Loathesasuke]

I've never had this experiance, but a lot of people I know have. So this is for the girls and boys who have ever had there heart broken.

What can I do?
What can I say?
When what you did,

Pushed my love away.
It was foolish of me,
To even believe
Things could work out
Perfectly.
Well now your gone,
My heart has no song.
You took it with you

Along with my soul.
Just to leave me to
Console.
The things I've done,
Are quite Groteque,
But the thing you did,
It made me a mess.

No longer will I feel this pain.
You make the word hurt seem very lame.
For the thing you did

it broke my heart,
Even if I loved you

From the very start.
So good-bye my love.

I bid thee a do.

Until we meet,

And our love is true.

Thank you,

For all that you do.

Forever and always

Truly love you.


I hope you enjoy this, I wrote it awhile ago so it's not the best.

[The irresponsible captain Jack Harkness]

  It was brave of you to share your poetry with us; it has a nice rhythm and some unique word choices.
I like it, even though it is about a sensitive subject.

[Loathesasuke]

It was brave of you to share your poetry with us; it has a nice rhythm and some unique word choices.
I like it, even though it is about a sensitve subject.

Thanks. As you can see I'm no poet, but this one was decent.

[Schmoopy]

i like

[Loathesasuke]

i like

Thank you. >.<